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TANGO - 342 words
As I approach the old stiff door,
my hands are shaking with anxiety and liberation all at the same time. I only
wish I had more courage at the times when I needed it the most.
I clear my throat nervously as I
sit in the dark room. My eyes scan the area, looking for any open spaces which
could lead to a breach of confidentiality. The dark room brings back memories
of entrapment and discomfort. Although it’s difficult to bear, it’s something
that I have to do.
Suddenly, the old wooden door
creeks open, but from the other side. The presence immediately demands respect
and attention, communicating to my soul on a subconscious level. I can smell
him from where I’m sitting. The scent is not one I wish to store in my memory.
I know this process all too well. It’s time to begin…
“Forgive me Father for I have sinned.”
“My last confession was 12 years ago”.
“You see, I’m having some
difficulty complying with the standards society has set for my generation.
Society demands so much yet gives me absolutely nothing in return.”
“There are these choices that I’m
faced with, most are associated with physical desires and insecure mockery,
determined to derail me from who I truly am. You see Father, I’m faced with the
decision of choosing blue eyes over hazel; tanned and exotic skin over fair and
porcelain; passionate and lustful desire over respectful and graceful.”
“Society demands that I should be
concerned with the opinion of my neighbour, or the lifestyle of the rich and
famous. Somewhere deep within me, my soul is at war.”
“I’ve chosen to emancipate myself
from the clutches of societal pressure, to showcase the new me, to show others
that I am not afraid to take chances and put myself out there, to love without
limits.”
“However, this is where the problem comes in…”
“Forgive me Father for I have sinned.”
“I am in love with two men, and I don’t plan on letting
either of them go.”
It takes two to tango! Thrilling excerpt...
ReplyDeleteWhat happens next?
Thanks Michelle! I was so nervous to post... Wasn't sure how it would be received. I'm working on another piece, will post soon xxx
DeleteThat last line is awesome. Engrossing excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteWow, that was really good.
ReplyDeleteThank you Suz.. It's my first published piece. Glad you liked it.
Deletethat was intriguing! great lead in!
ReplyDeletei wonder if she will end up choosing one or lose both!
thrilling indeed!
thanks for joining us!
Thanks for the platform Tara!
DeleteThat is really great. I felt so uncomfortable like your character and yet confident the more they confessed! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating!
Heather
Thanks Heather.. It feels good to participate. This definitely won't be the last time. Thanks for the platform!
DeleteHow naughty! I like it. Very well written
ReplyDeleteThanks Murees! Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteThat was a really great post. I like how you built up the tension with it and then zinged us with that last line. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Rena.. Puts a smile on my face knowing you enjoyed it.
DeleteYou definitely know how to end on a cliffy!
ReplyDeletelol thanks Nicki... Nothing like a little drama to get the blood boiling.
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